Wrote another song, 'Re-sensitised'

[Tommy]

I know the singing's not perfect. I need lessons :embarassed:

interested in what people think regardless:

Re-sensitised (http://torolk.homestead.com/files/Re-sensitised.mp3)

[Will]

Did you write that and play that yourself? If so that's awesome. Ok you need a bit more confidence with your singing - but that'll come in time. Thanks for sharing that with us. :cool: :)

[Belmit]

I'm normally quite picky about music, but I liked that a lot. Sort out the vocals a little bit and it's kind of Gorillaz meets New Order. :)

[Stan_Lite]

it's kind of Gorillaz meets New Order.

I can't believe I read that and still listened to it :shocked:

Having said that - I quite liked it. Not normally my cup of tea but for it's genre, quite good.

As you say yourself, the vocals could do with a bit of work. I liked the guitar work (lead and bass).

The songwriting and performance indicate a real talent - keep at it :)

Stan :)

[Tommy]

Thanks a lot folks! glad you like the music :)

Didn't expect such a positive response :o I'll remember you're a good audience :D