OUT OF THE BLUE - new song, just finished recording it. please critique

[Tommy]

Hey guys, I've just finished recording a new song called Out of the Blue. I've posted a couple songs before, but I think this is by far the best thing I've produced so far. Please let me know what you think :)

OUT OF THE BLUE (http://torolk.homestead.com/files/Out_of_the_Blue.mp3)

Thanks!
Tommy

[Haly]

Ooh I quite like that :) You seem to have got the contrast between your voice and the music better so neither is too dominant.
Not too sure about the guitar riff bit near the end though but probably just a matter of different taste. :)

[Stan_Lite]

Personally, I preferred the last one.

This one is a bit "Buzzcocks meets Deep Purple" - doesn't work for me :(

On a more positive note, the vocals seem better.

Stan :)

[Tommy]

Thanks :)

I guess it's personal preference really. Glad you noticed the singing though, I think that's been a bit of an achilles heel but I'm getting alright at that now.

[Stan_Lite]

Thanks :)

I guess it's personal preference really. Glad you noticed the singing though, I think that's been a bit of an achilles heel but I'm getting alright at that now.

Absolutely down to personal preference and not meant as a criticism as such. Singing definitely improved - keep it up :)

Stan :)

[8 I3ALL]

Ooh I quite like that :)
Not too sure about the guitar riff bit near the end though but probably just a matter of different taste. :)


yep same here