homemade poetry

Pickers · 09-02-2008, 09:50

A couple of years ago I was ordered to make a valentines card and write a poem for Clare in it, and I've just found what I wrote...
LOL!!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pickers, bitter at being told to write poetry but also wanting to show "I do care"

I love you when the day breaks,
Till when the sun goes down.
You are such good company,
And fun to be around.

So there is my love poem,
To put into your card.
I had a go – as best I could
But found it very hard.

Sincerity in rhyming verse,
Is difficult to achieve.
And keeping meter’s impossible -
When my heart skips a beat thinking of you.

Just believe me when I tell you,
All through the year it’s true.
I love that you love me
And I undeniably love you.

Tak · 09-02-2008, 11:40

*Giggles* Aww

Nutcase · 09-02-2008, 11:41

Aw that's so sweet

Belmit · 09-02-2008, 14:38

Gay!

Kell_ee001 · 09-02-2008, 18:50

aaaaawwwwww

So sweet!

Only poetry I wrote was never that lovely

Pheebs · 09-02-2008, 18:59

I heartily giggled at it! When I said "a poem would be nice" I meant something jokey! He did really well I thought... put mine to shame... my one to him had lines in it like:

"You make me laugh so much it's silly
and you have a BIG HUGE Willy!"

petemc · 09-02-2008, 20:11

I'd date you.

divine · 09-02-2008, 20:55

Quote:

Originally Posted by petemc

I'd date you.

That's a bad thing though Pete, no need to try and give the guy nightmares.

petemc · 09-02-2008, 21:05

Crush my dreams why don't you.

09-02-2008, 11:40	#2
Tak L'Oréal Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Portsmouth Posts: 9,977	Giggles Aww __________________ The look on your face when a toddler rips out your heart and shows it to you? Priceless.... For everything else, there's FWOOSH!

09-02-2008, 14:38	#4
Belmit The Mouse King of Denmark Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: The Winchester Posts: 6,476	Gay! __________________

09-02-2008, 18:50	#5
Kell_ee001 Wants Big Meat Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Newcastle Posts: 6,478	aaaaawwwwww So sweet! Only poetry I wrote was never that lovely __________________

09-02-2008, 18:59	#6
Pheebs Deep Throat Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 6,512	I heartily giggled at it! When I said "a poem would be nice" I meant something jokey! He did really well I thought... put mine to shame... my one to him had lines in it like: "You make me laugh so much it's silly and you have a BIG HUGE Willy!" __________________ http://www.spiffingdesigns.co.uk

09-02-2008, 20:11	#7
petemc Moonshine Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Nr Liverpewl Posts: 4,371	I'd date you. __________________ Thats no hamster, its a space station!

09-02-2008, 11:41	#3
Nutcase Moonshine Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Chelmsford, innit! Posts: 3,979	Aw that's so sweet

09-02-2008, 21:05	#9
petemc Moonshine Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Nr Liverpewl Posts: 4,371	Crush my dreams why don't you. __________________ Thats no hamster, its a space station!