A Kettle of Fish - Card Updates - Page 2

Nutcase · 14-03-2008, 15:00

Sounds very promising

No idea what a good/bad commision rate is, but I'm sure you'll check it thoroughly before signing anything!

Pheebs · 14-03-2008, 18:46

Hello!

Well firstly, BIG SPANK YOU to the Desmo for his help with PDFing and FTPing and things

As well as the Jasper and Belmit for helping with wording and such (though brain finally fizzled in the end so God knows what I've done now!) I think we've quite established I'm in debt to many people on here already and I'm about to put myself into more!

Would people be so kind as to have a peek at my which Maggy has asked for and just check it over!?

The writing bit... I've played around a few times with it now but seem to be getting no further with it and have gone past the stage of being able to see my own errors!

Comments and any ideas for changes would be MUCHLY appreciated!

Fankoo and wubs to the people xxx

My poodfff

BBx · 14-03-2008, 18:57

IT IS BRILLIANT!!! At the moment we are tendering our design agency and this just woke me up! I wish they would take a leaf out of your book!

One thing I was going to suggest earlier - wouldn't it be better to add the copyright text across the images as a watermark like gettyimages do? As people can still cut/paste these?

Or did you think of that, but it would ruin the impact of the piccies?

I LOVE the fact that you have now immortalised me as 26

that has totally cheered me up!!! THANK YOU honey!

BB x

Tak · 14-03-2008, 19:03

Looks absolutely fab hunny

Pickers · 14-03-2008, 19:29

At 23, a man of few words is I.

Pheebs · 14-03-2008, 19:30

oh yes

The ages - they may have been altered due to giving more of a range of ages

Well it's Desmo to thank for the layout. He's the design genius. I just supplied the pics and the box and he plonked it all together!

Does it read alright though? That's my main concern!

Pickers · 14-03-2008, 19:34

better than your Spoken English. \

/

BBx · 14-03-2008, 19:38

How about a title... 'How it all began...' or something?

Wouldn't use 'doodles' as most of the wording has been quite businesslike and it reads a bit random to chuck in that one... ?

"interact with games and other such activities..."?

I am still at work so have my 'harsh executive' head on... so apols for comments

What were your thoughts on the watermarking? Do you think it would be ok not to go with this? Who will you be sending this to - are they trustworthy?

Well done you both!

BB x

Pheebs · 14-03-2008, 19:47

Oh yes! Watermarking!

I did watermark my images and they looked super dooper poo. I know they can be copied but at least they won't be of superb quality and it does have the copyright note on it as a deterrant.

It's going to be sent to potential publishers and clients. All my work to date has been fully copyrighted so if any numpty rips it I will have them for it! Big time!

Fankoo for the correction of the wording - I need proper proper criticism though as this is going to be mahoosively important!

As for doodles... I didn't know what else to put (other than "sketches" with I've already put in a few times). Plus I don't draw or anything as such... I quite literally doodle! *need help thinking up a better word!*

Man I've stared at the screen too long. Got myself a glass of wine and going to have me a bath now to reeeeeeelax!

Fankoo for your help peoples

Pickers · 14-03-2008, 19:49

I cant imagine Mei being a harsh executive...at least - not without conjuring up disrespectful mental images....

14-03-2008, 18:46	#12
Pheebs Deep Throat Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 6,512	Hello! Well firstly, BIG SPANK YOU to the Desmo for his help with PDFing and FTPing and things As well as the Jasper and Belmit for helping with wording and such (though brain finally fizzled in the end so God knows what I've done now!) I think we've quite established I'm in debt to many people on here already and I'm about to put myself into more! Would people be so kind as to have a peek at my which Maggy has asked for and just check it over!? The writing bit... I've played around a few times with it now but seem to be getting no further with it and have gone past the stage of being able to see my own errors! Comments and any ideas for changes would be MUCHLY appreciated! Fankoo and wubs to the people xxx My poodfff __________________ http://www.spiffingdesigns.co.uk

14-03-2008, 19:03	#14
Tak L'Oréal Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Portsmouth Posts: 9,977	Looks absolutely fab hunny __________________ The look on your face when a toddler rips out your heart and shows it to you? Priceless.... For everything else, there's FWOOSH!

14-03-2008, 19:29	#15
Pickers Absinthe Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Cornwall Posts: 2,692	At 23, a man of few words is I. __________________ Pictures

14-03-2008, 19:30	#16
Pheebs Deep Throat Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 6,512	oh yes The ages - they may have been altered due to giving more of a range of ages Well it's Desmo to thank for the layout. He's the design genius. I just supplied the pics and the box and he plonked it all together! Does it read alright though? That's my main concern! __________________ http://www.spiffingdesigns.co.uk

14-03-2008, 19:34	#17
Pickers Absinthe Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Cornwall Posts: 2,692	better than your Spoken English. \/ __________________ Pictures

14-03-2008, 15:00	#11
Nutcase Moonshine Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Chelmsford, innit! Posts: 3,979	Sounds very promising No idea what a good/bad commision rate is, but I'm sure you'll check it thoroughly before signing anything!

14-03-2008, 18:57	#13
BBx Reverse SuBo Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: London Posts: 8,673	IT IS BRILLIANT!!! At the moment we are tendering our design agency and this just woke me up! I wish they would take a leaf out of your book! One thing I was going to suggest earlier - wouldn't it be better to add the copyright text across the images as a watermark like gettyimages do? As people can still cut/paste these? Or did you think of that, but it would ruin the impact of the piccies? I LOVE the fact that you have now immortalised me as 26 that has totally cheered me up!!! THANK YOU honey! BB x

14-03-2008, 19:38	#18
BBx Reverse SuBo Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: London Posts: 8,673	How about a title... 'How it all began...' or something? Wouldn't use 'doodles' as most of the wording has been quite businesslike and it reads a bit random to chuck in that one... ? "interact with games and other such activities..."? I am still at work so have my 'harsh executive' head on... so apols for comments What were your thoughts on the watermarking? Do you think it would be ok not to go with this? Who will you be sending this to - are they trustworthy? Well done you both! BB x Last edited by BBx; 14-03-2008 at 19:41.

14-03-2008, 19:47	#19
Pheebs Deep Throat Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 6,512	Oh yes! Watermarking! I did watermark my images and they looked super dooper poo. I know they can be copied but at least they won't be of superb quality and it does have the copyright note on it as a deterrant. It's going to be sent to potential publishers and clients. All my work to date has been fully copyrighted so if any numpty rips it I will have them for it! Big time! Fankoo for the correction of the wording - I need proper proper criticism though as this is going to be mahoosively important! As for doodles... I didn't know what else to put (other than "sketches" with I've already put in a few times). Plus I don't draw or anything as such... I quite literally doodle! need help thinking up a better word! Man I've stared at the screen too long. Got myself a glass of wine and going to have me a bath now to reeeeeeelax! Fankoo for your help peoples __________________ http://www.spiffingdesigns.co.uk

14-03-2008, 19:49	#20
Pickers Absinthe Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Cornwall Posts: 2,692	I cant imagine Mei being a harsh executive...at least - not without conjuring up disrespectful mental images.... __________________ Pictures