29-05-2008, 17:48 | #161 |
Deep Throat
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 6,512
|
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay Pete! Go go go you!
It's AWESOME! So happy for you, really am! Uber chuffed! |
29-05-2008, 23:52 | #162 |
Moonshine
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Nr Liverpewl
Posts: 4,371
|
Thanky-doodle BD creatives taking the world by storm
__________________
Thats no hamster, its a space station! |
30-05-2008, 13:19 | #163 |
I iz speshul
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Liverpool
Posts: 6,296
|
Me too. I forsee a mini BD trip into Liverpool to go around the book shops when it's released
__________________
Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness, that most frightens us. Your playing small does not serve the world. There is nothing enlightened about shrinking so that other people won't feel insecure around you. We are all meant to shine as children do. It's not just in some of us; it is in everyone. And as we let our own lights shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same. As we are liberated from our own fear, our presence automatically liberates others. |
30-05-2008, 13:52 | #164 |
Screaming Orgasm
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Newbury
Posts: 15,194
|
Impromptu autograph session?
|
30-05-2008, 15:21 | #165 |
Absinthe
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Devonshire
Posts: 1,143
|
|
30-05-2008, 15:26 | #166 |
Moonshine
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Nr Liverpewl
Posts: 4,371
|
lol! "Which is Pete? Oh he's that bright red guy over there. Damn, that dude is red!"
__________________
Thats no hamster, its a space station! |
13-06-2008, 01:23 | #167 | |
Moonshine
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Nr Liverpewl
Posts: 4,371
|
How does this look? It'll be the intro to my book. I'm not sure if its all needed. Hell, I'm not sure what I was meant to write but I figured as its my first book that it would be fitting to say how I got here.
Quote:
__________________
Thats no hamster, its a space station! |
|
13-06-2008, 03:40 | #168 |
Screaming Orgasm
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Newbury
Posts: 15,194
|
I gave it a quick scan and I'll read it properly when I'm not tired, but I could get a fair idea from the first paragraph or two. I don't know the intricate details of the book but I'm assuming it's the Amazon one linked above, and thus I suspect that what you've written is probably not what you need.
What you've written is about you. It's very interesting for sure, but generally I think an introduction to a book - (auto)biographies and novels aside - needs to be about the book - what the book is, why it is, and who you are now. The key is to grab the reader's attention and make them want to look at the rest of the book. Try and keep it short (a page or two at the most) and to the point. If there's scope in the book for going into more detail about yourself, then that would be where the information above would go. Try and find a book that's similar in style (not necessarily content) to what you're doing, and use that to get you started. Failing that, I suspect the publisher will be only too happy to give some guidance as to what they think it needs. PS - this is only from experience of looking at books, not creating them. PPS - no hard feelings I hope. If I've been insensitive then feel free to slap me upside my head with a slightly damp kipper. Last edited by Mark; 13-06-2008 at 04:15. |
13-06-2008, 10:07 | #169 |
Moonshine
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Nr Liverpewl
Posts: 4,371
|
Don't worry dude. I have no idea what I should be writing Its going to be 100% photos. I think they'll make the reader want to look at the book more than the intro will. I figured I'd write about how it all came about incase that was interesting to the reader. The photos are part of a larger project, which came about from getting into photography and such.
__________________
Thats no hamster, its a space station! |
13-06-2008, 11:04 | #170 |
I iz speshul
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Liverpool
Posts: 6,296
|
I do wonder whether the first section needs to be as long, though I know you want to say how you got where you are now. I love the last paragraph though, no matter what you do please leave that in
__________________
Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. It is our light, not our darkness, that most frightens us. Your playing small does not serve the world. There is nothing enlightened about shrinking so that other people won't feel insecure around you. We are all meant to shine as children do. It's not just in some of us; it is in everyone. And as we let our own lights shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same. As we are liberated from our own fear, our presence automatically liberates others. |