OUT OF THE BLUE - new song, just finished recording it. please critique

Tommy · 06-12-2006, 20:17

Hey guys, I've just finished recording a new song called Out of the Blue. I've posted a couple songs before, but I think this is by far the best thing I've produced so far. Please let me know what you think

OUT OF THE BLUE

Thanks!
Tommy

Haly · 06-12-2006, 20:25

Ooh I quite like that

You seem to have got the contrast between your voice and the music better so neither is too dominant.
Not too sure about the guitar riff bit near the end though but probably just a matter of different taste.

Stan_Lite · 06-12-2006, 20:33

Personally, I preferred the last one.

This one is a bit "Buzzcocks meets Deep Purple" - doesn't work for me

On a more positive note, the vocals seem better.

Stan

Tommy · 06-12-2006, 20:36

Thanks

I guess it's personal preference really. Glad you noticed the singing though, I think that's been a bit of an achilles heel but I'm getting alright at that now.

Stan_Lite · 06-12-2006, 20:41

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tommy

Thanks

I guess it's personal preference really. Glad you noticed the singing though, I think that's been a bit of an achilles heel but I'm getting alright at that now.

Absolutely down to personal preference and not meant as a criticism as such. Singing definitely improved - keep it up

Stan

8 I3ALL · 06-12-2006, 20:48

Quote:

Originally Posted by Haly

Ooh I quite like that

Not too sure about the guitar riff bit near the end though but probably just a matter of different taste.

yep same here

06-12-2006, 20:17	#1
Tommy Long Island Iced Tea Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Nagoya, Japan Posts: 150	OUT OF THE BLUE - new song, just finished recording it. please critique Hey guys, I've just finished recording a new song called Out of the Blue. I've posted a couple songs before, but I think this is by far the best thing I've produced so far. Please let me know what you think OUT OF THE BLUE Thanks! Tommy

06-12-2006, 20:25	#2
Haly Do you want to hide in my box? Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 14,941	Ooh I quite like that You seem to have got the contrast between your voice and the music better so neither is too dominant. Not too sure about the guitar riff bit near the end though but probably just a matter of different taste. __________________ Halycopter

06-12-2006, 20:33	#3
Stan_Lite Stan, Stan the FLASHER MAN! Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In bed with your sister Posts: 5,483	Personally, I preferred the last one. This one is a bit "Buzzcocks meets Deep Purple" - doesn't work for me On a more positive note, the vocals seem better. Stan __________________ Just because I have a short attention span doesn't mean I...

06-12-2006, 20:36	#4
Tommy Long Island Iced Tea Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Nagoya, Japan Posts: 150	Thanks I guess it's personal preference really. Glad you noticed the singing though, I think that's been a bit of an achilles heel but I'm getting alright at that now.