Wrote another song, 'Re-sensitised'

Tommy · 30-10-2006, 01:30

I know the singing's not perfect. I need lessons

interested in what people think regardless:

Re-sensitised

Will · 30-10-2006, 21:29

Did you write that and play that yourself? If so that's awesome. Ok you need a bit more confidence with your singing - but that'll come in time. Thanks for sharing that with us.

Belmit · 30-10-2006, 22:33

I'm normally quite picky about music, but I liked that a lot. Sort out the vocals a little bit and it's kind of Gorillaz meets New Order.

Stan_Lite · 30-10-2006, 23:32

Quote:

Originally Posted by Belmit

it's kind of Gorillaz meets New Order.

I can't believe I read that and still listened to it

Having said that - I quite liked it. Not normally my cup of tea but for it's genre, quite good.

As you say yourself, the vocals could do with a bit of work. I liked the guitar work (lead and bass).

The songwriting and performance indicate a real talent - keep at it

Stan

Tommy · 03-11-2006, 15:00

Thanks a lot folks! glad you like the music

Didn't expect such a positive response

I'll remember you're a good audience

30-10-2006, 01:30	#1
Tommy Long Island Iced Tea Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Nagoya, Japan Posts: 150	Wrote another song, 'Re-sensitised' I know the singing's not perfect. I need lessons interested in what people think regardless: Re-sensitised

30-10-2006, 21:29	#2
Will BBx woz 'ere :P Join Date: Jan 1970 Posts: 2,147,487,208	Did you write that and play that yourself? If so that's awesome. Ok you need a bit more confidence with your singing - but that'll come in time. Thanks for sharing that with us. __________________ *No No!*

30-10-2006, 22:33	#3
Belmit The Mouse King of Denmark Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: The Winchester Posts: 6,476	I'm normally quite picky about music, but I liked that a lot. Sort out the vocals a little bit and it's kind of Gorillaz meets New Order. __________________

03-11-2006, 15:00	#5
Tommy Long Island Iced Tea Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Nagoya, Japan Posts: 150	Thanks a lot folks! glad you like the music Didn't expect such a positive response I'll remember you're a good audience